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Post by Davy Jones (inactive) on Aug 23, 2006 23:05:41 GMT
lalalalala! im gonna write a totally random story that has almost nothing to do /w the POTC trilogy! here goes
Jack was pacing his cabin, thinking about Elizabeth."What if she doesn't love me back?"
edit*=im sorry, it was a really crappy opening line, so i had 2 change it.
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Post by Davy Jones (inactive) on Aug 24, 2006 0:50:07 GMT
"I want her to be mine! I need to know what she thinks of me!" he said with an urgent look on his face that changed to a smirk and a raised eyebrow." I need some rum!" Jack walked down to the cellar and grabbed a bottle of rum. he uncorked it, took a swig, and walked back to his cabin. "I wonder where she is now? I bet shes sleeping. After all, it is 12:00 in the morning. Hmmmmmm." He had an idea. Jack sneaked into Elizabeths cabin, and tiptoed up to the side of her bed. He took off his hat, lowered his head, and pressed his lips to hers. Elizabeth woke with a start and Jack drew away. "Jack! What the h*** are you doing?!" she wiped her lips with her hand. "I just thought you would want a taste!" he said mischeiviously.He pushed the rum bottle into her hand. "Get out of my room, or you'll taste more than rum when you wake up tomorrow!"She shoved the bottle back into his hand. "Come on Lizzy.." "IT'S MISS SWANN!" she screamed. "Liz, you know you want me!" Elizabeth reached over the opposite side of her bed and pulled her sword out of its case and put it to Jack's neck. "If you want to keep your pretty little neck, you will leave NOW!" "You think my neck is pretty?" Jack drew his sword and held it to Liz's neck."If you want to keep your head, you will do as I say. Elizabeth stood up, the sword still to Jack's neck."And what is it that you say?" "Marry me!" "Never!"Jack raised the bottle of rum and dumped it on her head and let the bottle shatter on the floor. A sword fight began. Both swinging vigorously at eachother. 30 minutes later, Liz got tired, dropped her sword, pushed Jack's hand down to his side, and shoved her face in his. Jack dropped his sword and grabbed Elizabeth around the waist. They continued this for a few more minutes and then Elizabeth released. "Now LEAVE!" she yelled. Jack walked out the door, dazed from thoughts of what just happened. Elizabeth layed on her bed, wondering why she had done that. Without thinking anymore, she drifted off to sleep. Jack, however, was far from sleep. He was looking over the edge of the Pearl, savoring what just happened. ******* another edit*=im sorry, that beginning was horrible and i had to change it.
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Post by Davy Jones (inactive) on Sept 4, 2006 0:55:49 GMT
continuing!
the next morning, Jack woke up, thinking about last night. Without warning, Elizabeth walked into his cabin. "Elizabeth, darling!" "Don't call me darling, Jack!" said Elizabeth, angrily."Sorry, luv." Elizabeth walked closer. "I want to talk about last night, Jack." Jack had a smile on his face. "I've been thinking about that all night." "I take it you enjoyed it?" Jack shifted in his bed. "More than you will ever know, luv. I only wish you felt the same." Elizabeth took a seat on the foot of his bed. "How do you know I didn't?" she said with a smerk on her face. "there's only one way to find out." Jack grabbed Elizabeth and kissed her passionately. Minutes later when Jack pulled away, Elizabeth pulled him forward again and continued their kiss. They finally released about 15 minutes later. "I have my answer." Jack said with a smile. "You certainly do, Jack Sparrow." responded Elizabeth. They kissed for a few more seconds and then released. "Why were you so startled with me last night?" asked Jack. "I don't know. I guess you kind of caught me by surprise. I didn't know you felt that way about me. I thought maybe you were just playing." "I would never play with love." replied Jack in a whisper. Jack gave her a brief kiss. Jack escorted Elizabeth out of the cabin.
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Post by Davy Jones (inactive) on Sept 17, 2006 1:56:15 GMT
i dont know what 2 write now. hhhhhhmmmmm.
That night they made port somewhere in the south of th Caribbean. "What are we here for, Jack?" asked Liz "To see an old friend." they walked up to a very shabby looking cabin adnwalked in. At first, they thought there was no one there, but then Jack spotted a woman sitting at a cluttered desk. "Jack Sparrow! It's been too long!" replied the lady "Nigh on 4 years, i think. How've you been keeping, Sophie?" "I've been well enough. How 'bout you?" "Couldn't be better." he smiled and looked at Liz, who gave him a perplexed look. "And who is this fine young lady?" asked Sophie "I'm Elizabeth Swann. Pleased to meet you." "This is my first and only lady." replied Jack proudly "I'm glad to know you have found what you want." Jack smiled "Well have a seat." she gestured to two seats opposite her desk and they took them. "Jack, who is this?" Elizabeth muttered "Lizzie, this is Sophie Jeds. She's an old friend." "And what is it that you are here for, Jack?" "I just wanted to see how you were." Jack would not look directly at Sophie "I know you too well to fall for that, Jack Sparrow. You want something." "Very well. I need a map." "Of what?" "I think you know." "Ah! That one. Follow me."
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Post by Barbossa (inactive) on Sept 17, 2006 2:01:32 GMT
O.o omfg jack is LARY in this!!!! it reminds me of a horrible nightmare that Rach told me about... it was something like jack and liz get married and have kids and they settle down and jack DOESNT WANT 2 BE A PIRATE NEMORE!!!!!!!! omg. this reminds me of it... O.o plz dont make them fall in love and do that or rach wil freak xD
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Post by Davy Jones (inactive) on Sept 17, 2006 3:41:46 GMT
i only wish i knew what u were talking about. im sry, but i am a Jack/Liz shipper. but i swear 2 u that Jack will always b a pirate, k?
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Post by Cap'n Jack on Sept 17, 2006 13:48:48 GMT
O.o omg u told her!!! BARB!!!! lol xD he'd bloody well not marry her and not b a pirate... id DIE
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Post by Davy Jones (inactive) on Sept 20, 2006 4:52:15 GMT
i swore! he will marry, but he will ALWAYS B A PIRATE! i wouldnt dream of jack- pirate. Jack-pirate= crappy story!!!!
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Post by Davy Jones (inactive) on Sept 22, 2006 23:37:34 GMT
ummm, i dont even know where im going with this. im just making it up on the spot.....
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Post by Davy Jones (inactive) on Nov 24, 2006 16:11:02 GMT
wow, ive been so busy with my other fanfic, i ttly 4got bout this one!
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